Diamond key

Diamond key

A Poem by The Immortal Phoenix
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My dad just got back from jail so this peace is for him about him.

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Round here there are only killers and thieves,
so who you gonna be?
We all can talk,
but nobody in here will say who has the diamond key.
Cus in here we all can walk
but aint a one of us free.
In here there are lesions to be learned
and the price of pride and freedom is the only fee.
Too much darkness shrouds the mind and all the thoughts we can not see.
All my secrets made,
tost and lost, like the diamond key.
For I know who had it and I know who lost it,
but not a regret do I spare, for that person was me.

© 2019 The Immortal Phoenix


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Hey at last you came , thanks Mickey for writing this poem . I am getting the sadness behind this poem . Good write , nice flow. Keep writing and keep smiling. ((Smiles )) 😊😊😊😊

Posted 5 Years Ago


Just some minor spelling errors, not terrible for those spelling. Very good, the rhyme makes this seem like an upbeat rap. Put some music on this, and you'll have a hit song. The message is nice and I like the diamond key part

Posted 5 Years Ago


MidnightKingdom

5 Years Ago

Why would it be stereotypical? And do whatever you want! This is creativity! :D
The Immortal  Phoenix

5 Years Ago

Its would be stereotypical of me cus Im African American. but I dont think that matters.
MidnightKingdom

5 Years Ago

no it doesn't matter :) poetry is poetry! I like this, my friend

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The Immortal Phoenix

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My Name is Micky Gear. I am the immortal Phoenix. You cannot kill me, at this point my biggest fear is myself. more..

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