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A Poem by bubbles
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i dont relay have a home at the moment

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home
what is home?
bricks and mortar?
the bed you sleep in?
they say "home is where the heart is"
but
what if you do not know 
where that is
where you're heart hides from the world
what if there is no place you feel comfortable?
or safe?
you're family provide you no comfort
you are rejected by those you work with
you're separated from you're friends and cannot reach them
you are alone
you spend every day.
looking foe somewhere you belong.
for a place you can live
for people who accept you for who you are
but there is none
you see illusions of hope
an ally in you're search
an Allie
all to willing to betray you with the slightest cause
and as you fells that dagger slipping into you're back
pulling you further from you're home
you realize
you're alone

© 2010 bubbles


Author's Note

bubbles
although i have had every situation here i have not had them all at the same time. threw most of my life there has been at least 1 place i feel at home (usually being school or college) but the feeling is all to real

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Home is not a place to stay. Home is a place to believe in. You have described it well both good and bad. I'm certain a lot of people will identify with this poem. Like all relationships we enjoy, there is a usually something good to it if we put good in.
I underline usually.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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On personal belief that a home does not exist i cant really dwell into this poem or attach any kinda of emotion to it.
But it is written well and truethly a veyr person piiece

Posted 14 Years Ago


awww this was so sad but yet so good! you did a great job expressing this situation! well done!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I loved ur poem and describes the issue well! i feel i am constantly looking for home. i feel stuck where i am and therefore take it for granted... because i think there will always be better. Thank you for this poem, it was a good read.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Home is not a place to stay. Home is a place to believe in. You have described it well both good and bad. I'm certain a lot of people will identify with this poem. Like all relationships we enjoy, there is a usually something good to it if we put good in.
I underline usually.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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bubbles
bubbles

london, United Kingdom



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i grew up in the country side in the west of England and recently moved to London. i am lucky to have many good friends after starting life without them. i am now aiming to work in stage managemen.. more..

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