Life is Like A Beautiful Ocean

Life is Like A Beautiful Ocean

A Poem by *Evelen*

Life is like a deep, beautiful ocean.

At times it will be calm.

Just flowing with it's own beat.

But occasionally waves creep their way through.

Just rolling on by as usual.

But then the waves start to thrash harder and harder.

While the sky turns a deadly gray.

The water gives you it's twists and turns.

Making you unbelievably hopless, and lost.

You wonder alone in the darkness.

But don't worry!

Only a moment longer,

And the ocean will be itself again.

© 2010 *Evelen*

Author's Note

This is how I look at life. Just get through the crap, and you'll be okay!

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I like how you compared life to the ocean its very creative and I especially like the ending:
"Only a moment longer,
And the ocean will be itself again."
Life can be complicated and hard, but if you wait out the storm it will pass and it will be back to normal. A great message comes from this piece, nicely done.

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Added on October 16, 2009
Last Updated on January 3, 2010



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