Love... Such a Misused Word.

Love... Such a Misused Word.

A Poem by *Evelen*

Love is the word that is most misused.

Some say it just because the other did.

Some say it just to get pleasure.

I wish that every time someone said it

They meant it…

When you’re in love

You don’t want to make the other cry.

When you’re in love

You’ll do everything in order not to fight.

When you’re in love…

Why must I explain it to you?

You should know…

You should be the one

To stop me from crying

Instead of making these tears fall.

You should be the one

To end this fight you started.

This fight over nothing…

I did nothing wrong,

and I’ve been trying to talk to you…

Yet my calls haven’t been answered.

My messages have been ignored.

You should know…

That when you’re in love

You’d do anything to make that person smile.

That when you’re in love

You’d do

 Anything to hear their voice…

Anything to see their face.

That when you’re in love…

Don’t you know?

Aren’t you in love?

Another lie I’ve been told…?

Well I know I’m in love

Cause I’m hurt yet still trying to hold on.

I know I’m in love

Cause I’m crying over your silences.

I know I’m in love…

This is foolish.

© 2010 *Evelen*


Author's Note

*Evelen*
Sorry if this doesn't make sense

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This is amazing, I love how you repeat 'When you're in love' it delivers how important it is to the reader, allowing us to understand that you are in love and for me questioning if the guy you love, loves you back.
I really enjoyed every word of it, the way you created a nice flow by rhyming =]
Great write, keep it up! =D

Posted 13 Years Ago


perfect affect and expression of my vew on love... love is something amazing but also so painful...

Posted 13 Years Ago



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