You

You

A Poem by *Evelen*

Your lips they are so soft

So gentle is you’re kiss

It sweeps away my pain

Forgetting what I miss

 

Your voice is so sweet

As you whisper to me

Telling me you love me

That I’m the only one you see 

 

You are my safe place

Your arms they are my wall

Protecting me from all bad things

And catching me when I fall

 

Your eyes see who I am

For whom I want to be

Not for what I am

Or what others see

 

Your smile is so bright

And so contagious it seems

Nothing is as beautiful

Not even my sweetest dreams

 

Your hands

Brush away my tears

And hold on tight to mine

As I face all my fears

 

Your heart is so warm

Beating so fast

I’m so happy

I have you at last

© 2010 *Evelen*


Author's Note

*Evelen*
Thank you for reading.

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I loved this reading this...very poetic in a sense of wonder...the whole time I was reading this I thought about my boyfriend...I would defenently read this to him if he would let me...wonderful...just...wonderful...


Posted 10 Years Ago


This is amazing. It really formed a picture in my mind. Exactly what I want :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


It's exactly how I feel about the one I love

Posted 10 Years Ago


This is adorable. Great write, thank you for sharing :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


love it! it was intense and intruging you had me at the first verse :) keep it up ! x

Posted 10 Years Ago


Aww so kawaii :D I really love how you managed to convey the emotions you feel when you're being held in the arms of the person you love; well done and thank you for sharing it with us :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


I really like this, well writen.

Posted 10 Years Ago


simple and good

Posted 10 Years Ago



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*Evelen*
*Evelen*

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Well I just turned 17! Yays so I thought to update I suppose. My writing usually in some way reflects on what I'm going through or went through. Even if fiction it has something in it that I have lear.. more..

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