Six Feet From The Edge

Six Feet From The Edge

A Poem by Michael
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I wrote this way back in high school, I was only 16...18 years ago..

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I'm up on a building
Deciding what to do
Should I go over the edge 
Or should I go with you
You cared enough to come up
And try to talk me down
But I was to bull headed 
And didn't turn around
Now I'm in the grave
Six foot under
I realize the pain I've caused
But I chose to go under
Under the light of life
Into the darkness of death
Forever lost without a cause
Please Lord forgive me
I didn't want to fall.

© 2011 Michael


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Hey,

This was great. Well- not like... It was greatly written. The way it all flowed together was awesome, and the way you managed to make me picture this going on? Not a lot of writers can do that to people.

This kinda touched me deeply, and maybe it was the words or maybe it was the emotions you undoubtedly put into it, but it was awesome-whatever it was

Posted 4 Years Ago



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Michael
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Richmond, IN



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