I Hate Myself

                   

If to break my heart would make you content,              

I wouldn’t want anything else.

My soul is for sale and my mind is for rent.

The truth is I do hate myself.

 

 

                           Mike Poe Potter Cot

 

 

Author's Note

If grammar is wrong please let me know, and let me know what you thought.

Reviews

[~angelalala~]

wow what a strong piece. something i can relate to. it's very simple, yet speaks volumes. i especially loved the first line. seems there are people who take pride in breaking hearts, & those who have lost self-respect/love or those of us who have never had it, are always getting taken to the cleaners. but my absolutely favorite line is:
"My soul is for sale and my mind is for rent". & no grammatical errors jumped out at me. wonderful write.

[Butterflymom]

This piece is AWESOME in it's beauty and simplicity. Very well done and creative. Keep up the incredible writing.

[Conversations Kill]

i love this piece! My favorite line is the third one. but it only works altogether. AWESOME JOB! :)

[No More]

Wow, I'm crushed. What a powerful poem - so short and simple, yet so deep and makes one think. I can relate to it - just wanting the other person to be happy even if it means you won't be. Heartbreaking and true. You did an excellent job on this.