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Compartment 114
Compartment 114
Love and Truth

Love and Truth

A Poem by For Who I Am
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Love and Truth comes from an anime I loved when I was 10.

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I will always be with you little one, my brother would say

He could even imprint it on a pile of clay

A feud happens between him and a friend

Who knew this one little mistake is the new trend

Everything changes in one go

Little brother knows, that's why beneath him is a pool of sorrow

For the one word he was afraid of was the world betrayal

Both worlds collide

They are new people coated with hate and revenge,

little one must fight, and sadly, avenge

Two people separate and one a murderer

The wind feels their sorrow and murmur

They turn on each other, their eyes empty black pools

Hating each other with disgust because they are both fools

Big brother cries with sorrow at his big mistake

He knows it is too late as his tears form into a lake

Now grown up, both filled with regrets

Picking them up one by one forming duets

 

© 2014 For Who I Am


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Thanks for letting me know just how much I miss my best friend
from high school, we were two peas in a pod, I lost touch with years ago,
and I allways wounder hows he's doing!


Thanks, with love! Johnson Bobby

Posted 9 Years Ago


For Who I Am

9 Years Ago

your Welcome! I hope you get in touch with your friend!
"They turn on each other, their eyes empty black pools
Hating each other with disgust because they are both fools"

&

"Now grown up, both filled with regrets
Picking them up one by one forming duets"

You and your meaningful endings ;w;
As always, it's beautiful.
I love the two lines I mentioned.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Totoro-Sama

9 Years Ago

:O Which ...?
For Who I Am

9 Years Ago

Naruto. From Sasuke and Itachi
Totoro-Sama

9 Years Ago

:O OMG. Did you watch Shippuden? I had stopped but ... when Itachi was "killed" by Sasuke .. xD
sorry, I meant "afraid of the WORD Betrayal" SOrry. Thanks though!

Posted 9 Years Ago


yuki

9 Years Ago

no problem :) I make many mistakes too so I hope people will correct me so I don't make the same mis.. read more
in line 5 where it says ''afraid of the world betrayal'' I think you meant ''worlds betrayal'' but otherwise very very good :)

Posted 9 Years Ago



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