Till Death NEVER do us apart

Till Death NEVER do us apart

A Poem by For Who I Am

I like you just the way you are
Your smile gives me hope because you shine like a star
Changing can be hard but it's not plain like a card
your beautiful just the way you are
I know someday we are not going to be here forever
But will it separate us?, never
I see the light has dimmed in your eyes
I cry and sigh but hope you survive
I held your hand until you took your last breath
Eternity will always be upon us but never Death
 

© 2014 For Who I Am


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I was also on the process of writing something about love that will never end even life after death but I somehow didn't nail it, so I stopped and just write another poem. But hey! You've got one here. I love this poem, the words I couldn't say and the message that were vague on the one the I've wrote are clearly written here. Great job!

Posted 9 Years Ago


For Who I Am

9 Years Ago

Thanks! I really appreciate it. The more comments, the more inspiration!
btw, if you want to call me for a review, you have to personally ask me on a PM xD

Posted 9 Years Ago


For Who I Am

9 Years Ago

I'll Keep that in mind! Thanks!
Totoro-Sama

9 Years Ago

^^ No Problem~!
"I know someday we are not going to be here forever
But will it separate us?, never
I see the light has dimmed in your eyes"

&

"I held your hand until you took your last breath
Eternity will always be upon us but never Death"

Those were amazing lines. Especially the last one. The first one I mentioned truly foreshadowed what would come in the end. But, the ending ... oh my Gosh ... it is true love when someone believes that death is temporary. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


For Who I Am

9 Years Ago

Thanks! : )
Totoro-Sama

9 Years Ago

No problem~
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Thanks for reviewing! :) ;)

Posted 9 Years Ago


This is great!

"Eternity will always be upon us but never Death"

Great job ^^

Posted 9 Years Ago


awww kawaii!!! its so cute

Posted 9 Years Ago



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