Is this really me?

Is this really me?

A Poem by Jimmy Seaman
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I got bullied a lot where I used to live. This poem is about it.

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I always thought I was nice
until I paid the price.

Never thought I'd end up like this
siting in school with a priss.

I thought I'd always have friends
until i saw them waiting around the bends.

I only ended up with six 
my social life never got fixed.

Everyone there hated me
so I just climbed up my own tree.

I thought about jumping and breaking my head
but the thought of my six friends saved me from being in a hospital bed.

© 2013 Jimmy Seaman


Author's Note

Jimmy Seaman
Yeah this happend. I'm done thinking about suicide.

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I'm glad you overcame the bullying. I was lucky. My dad told me to fight and never run. I was kicked out of many schools as a kid. Anger wasn't the answer. Sometime we must walk away and show no anger or emotion. People who need attention need to have control. I like the six friends who saved you. Can't allow the naysayers to slow you down. Thank you for sharing the poem and your thoughts.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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An incredible poem with a superb use of structure and word choice. Great work!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I'm glad you overcame the bullying. I was lucky. My dad told me to fight and never run. I was kicked out of many schools as a kid. Anger wasn't the answer. Sometime we must walk away and show no anger or emotion. People who need attention need to have control. I like the six friends who saved you. Can't allow the naysayers to slow you down. Thank you for sharing the poem and your thoughts.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Jimmy Seaman
Jimmy Seaman

Velva, ND



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I'm 15, 5' 9' 5' 10" area for height, 203 lbs, love Led Zeppelin, B-day is August 26. I'm in 10'th grade. I love to swim. I am bi. I love the show Inu-Yasha. I respect peoples feelings. I hate it when.. more..

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