The Trap

Narative poem for English

     He ran. 

Ran straight towards my lifeless body as I watched from heaven, crying and screaming out his name. 

It was a trap. 

They killed me and left my body for bait. 

    Roger, my dear friend, son of the governor. 

He sat by my body pulling the knife out of my back.

Realizing all to late that it was a trap.

   By the time he turned around I knew that he, would be by my side again soon.

He fell on top of my body, an arrow in his neck.  

"Welcome to heaven." was all I could say.

Our bodies were searched. 

After two days the bodies were found.

"That's the trap." 

And the bandits sprang again.

Reviews

[Perfect Mistake]

I liked the story that was told throughout this. Good work ^_____^

[Seanne Tholltree]

nice lil story in a poem

[Chesney W.]

Really good.......Loved it:)

[Demi Rose]

abstract but definitely a good write. i liked it.

[Ezekiel Silver]

Good poem. It has an interesting subject to it. Very creative.

[hmm]

I like this, this is really good. Intriguing and wonderful

[xSamilynnx]

wow impressive!! i agree with angie, good story line... post more!!!!!

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This was an interesting poem. I liked the storyline to it. It was really good. I thought you could turn this narrative into an actual story.