Dream State

Dream State

A Poem by minisla

Dream State

 

The reason why life is so bland and grey

While in dream state invigorating mind rearranged

All manner of things become my reality

Visions shapes and sizes are readily displayed

 

Experiencing one that’s recurring for almost five years

I have had some dreams which I can see vividly

Some stay with me still can last days even weeks

Others come in quick flashes and go almost immediately

 

Confused and befuddled are they intended to alert me?

About the faults and flaws in my life or maybe just

My minds way of informing me that caution is needed

Steps to take lightly for my futures dependency

 

Clarity comes when a moment in time must reveal

Those memories aroused a time to take heed

Errors unchangeable soon as they are unveiled

Paths chosen steps taken to unburden ones need

© 2013 minisla


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You have described dreams to us that we all have but cannot explain. I can relate to this and I am sure most people can, putting it into words is something else though, this poem does that. The last verse is very interesting and it gives a perfect ending to the story. These are your thoughts and are expressed really well, or should I say your dream experiences, which gives the subject matter a mystic bent. Going back to the last verse, I have never experienced that clarity, just confusion, so it's interesting to hear that.
I like this poem and I like the mystery it brings with it.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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You have described dreams to us that we all have but cannot explain. I can relate to this and I am sure most people can, putting it into words is something else though, this poem does that. The last verse is very interesting and it gives a perfect ending to the story. These are your thoughts and are expressed really well, or should I say your dream experiences, which gives the subject matter a mystic bent. Going back to the last verse, I have never experienced that clarity, just confusion, so it's interesting to hear that.
I like this poem and I like the mystery it brings with it.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love it! It really explains dreams in a great way! Nice poem;)

Posted 10 Years Ago


minisla

10 Years Ago

Thank you for reviewing it . I really appreciate it. Thanks
An interesting read about premonitions through dreams, the sub-conscious mind is a very powerful and not fully understood enigma, so indeed your well penned poem has much merit !

A thought provoking, excellent job, enjoyed this !

Posted 10 Years Ago


minisla

10 Years Ago

Thank you very much Tom

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minisla

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