My strength

My strength

A Poem by Mintwhiskers

I thought my life was over

and the last words spoken to you were in anger

We lashed in arugument to each other

and now i was faintly dying

I couldn't hear the soft beep beep next to me and couldn't feel a thing

my mind started to panic and a silent tear slid down my cheek

I wanted to continue to cry my heart out but I just couldn't

Was i dying

no i couldn't i couldn't leave you after the things I said

I started to scream in my head when suddenly

I hear a soft sob

then a kiss

was it my mom

no

it was you

I couldn't leave you

your kiss was returned and your love for me was my savior

my strength to keep alive

© 2009 Mintwhiskers


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once again my rachipookinz you are great!

Posted 15 Years Ago


wow ... very very nice indeed I must say ... excellent piece indeed ... great work ... I liked it ...
wonderfully written ... really reall good ... you should be proud :)


Posted 15 Years Ago



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