hopeless of love

hopeless of love

A Poem by Mintwhiskers

Our love encirlced the past

when we were young

that ball started it all and was followed by a kiss

a soft pair of lips crushing mine

and make my mind go in hyperspeed

but as marriage was decided

the family disinvited the thought of it

you were rich as i was poor

and now i find it hard to love and trust another

when my heart was once shattered in two

and the peices are hard to renew and put into one

© 2009 Mintwhiskers


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Very deep and meaningful!!! Nice writing!!!!

Posted 5 Years Ago


I really loved this- short yet wonderful. Great job! The flow was great... and I can relate to it so much... the heartbreak.

Love,
Chloe.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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