On my wall

On my wall

they march on my identity

like fire ants ready to eat my name.

Erasing my spirit

from humanity

and exploding my sight

from reality.

They scatter hate

free from their cold minds

to freeze my heart.

They craft comments

free from their blazing hands

to burn my soul.

They drink spiteful

free from the Amazon River

to descend my tears.

Masters of idiocy and ignorance,

brilliant engineers of my destruction,

you left no mercy on my precious mirror.

 

Reviews

[Emrick]

I like the idea and the message.

[Vikrantsingh]

Superb! just one word to describe. Every single human is attached to FB and they won't eat,sleep or date without FB
Great words and wonderfully executed :)

Cheers!!
Singh :)

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Tremendous, powerful and oh so painful. Put me in mind of how coworkers can sometimes make you feel.

[Ayanda Mteto]

This powerful, much said with few words. it is amazing what people post and comment on their wall complety turned social network into a nightmare.

[Anonymous/Anjaan ( Yash..]

1 word : "REALITY"
GREAT !

[alltheloveabove]

very nice poem. I sometimes do feel the same with you when I see all the hate in social networks. :)