Girl of constant misery

Girl of constant misery

A Poem by babyblue

It's about a girl who decides to get an abortion.I don't relly see it as prochoice view,or prolife view it's more neutral. will read it,n see what u think if intersted.



Girl of constant misery
By Ivonne L.
I am girl of constant misery I’ve seen sorrow all my days. I say goodbye to my unborn child. Perhaps I’ll die in that clinic.
Through this messed up world I’m about to sin. Perhaps god will someday forgive me. Oh I am a girl of constant misery. I never meant to hurt any one. I just can’t bear the pain.
I never really wanted go to those mountain where I’ve seen rain and felt thunder. Oh I am a girl of constant misery. I’ve been through a lot of crap.
If I knew what your intentions where honey I never gone along but here’s one promise to you I’ve see our unborn child walk down gods golden shore.
I‘m a girl of constant misery perhaps I’ll burn in those open flames, once I’m dead. I’m going back to California where I was born partly raced. The place where I started from.
I'm about to chase that golden California dream. Honey I'll make it big. I’m a girl of constant misery,prehaps I'll sell my soul down in the city of angels. Where my unborn child well be watching me closely from heaven’s sky's.  




© 2009 babyblue

Author's Note

it's sortive like the lyrics 2 bob dylans man of constant sorrow but a totally differfnt subject.

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yes, it conveys sorrow and a strong will to continue after a cruel
abandonment..very sad but very well said.

Posted 13 Years Ago

constant misery.Prehaps I'll sell my soul down in the city of angels. Where my unborn ---space after the period and prehaps

Posted 13 Years Ago

this is very american of you.
I enjoyed the reiteration that you are a girl of constant misery, it read like a song in that regard. onward and thanks, mate

Posted 13 Years Ago

this is actually my favorite peom by you.. great job

Posted 13 Years Ago

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Added on April 4, 2009
Last Updated on September 20, 2009



El paso, TX

Hey my names ivonne i'm 19 I wirte stores,and poems i go to college . I like scremo,punk,and classic rock bands such as bob marley bob dylan underoath,sliverstian,misfits,daed kenadys,the door,and t.. more..

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