Vodka Martini

Vodka Martini

A Poem by Amy

I carefully hold your stem in between my fingers,

as your liquid sloshes inside your glass.

A maraschino cherry lies at the bottom,

as the drinks are carefully passed.

We clink our glasses together,

as we casually laugh.

I rest my lips upon your edge,

and tilt what’s left of you inside my mouth.

You numb my soul,

I love the way you taste.

I want another one,

I could never let you go to waste.

© 2009 Amy


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I love the way you taste.
I want another one,
I could never let you go to waste.

Love these lines right here, this is a sensual write here.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is sensuously written and expressed with streamy, subtle passion and desire, enticing and tantalyzing
in flow and structure, a fun and creative work to ponder

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Never had a vodka martini myself but you make it sound rather inviting... I am more of a beer guy myself...

very nicely done... shows you can write bout anything and make it entertaining.

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

shaken not stirred please :) Simplistic and excellently executed. Never wanted a drink more. Bravo.

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

simple act, beautiful expression..
loved this poem.. it was an excellent read and a soothing one too..

:)

Regards,
Poetic Soul

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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