All Eyes On You

All Eyes On You

A Poem by Amy


All eyes on you,

people stop and stare,

as you walk by,

with your gorgeous hair.

You walk up the stairs,

with perfect poise,

everyone applauds you,

that’s quite the noise.

Your perfectly sculpted body,

your bare flawless back,

your sun kissed skin,

your perfect sized rack.

To every man you paint perfection,

who knew?

That whenever you breathe,

all eyes are glued to you.

© 2009 Amy

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Hmm interesting. Don't ever be jealous or upset over some other of the same safe of you. Female's can be b***h's and flaunt what hey got on the outside, but its more so of what's truly on the inside that counts for it.

Posted 12 Years Ago

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Interesting message. I'm trying to decide if it's a message of contempt/anger/jealousy or admiration. Maybe that is part of it...that it can go either way. Very good writing.

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Added on February 22, 2009
Last Updated on February 23, 2009




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