Caught

Caught

A Poem by Amy

Caught up in your eyes.

Caught between your smile.

Caught between your fingers.

Caught in denial.

Caught up in your words.

Caught between your lies.

Caught by your presence.

Caught in your disguise.

Caught by your twisted perfection.

Caught up in you.

Caught so many times.

© 2009 Amy


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Now I'm caught up by you! beautiful poem girlfriend! Sweet and stunning!

Much love n respect,
Anna

Caught in denial.
Caught up in your words.
Caught between your lies.



Posted 12 Years Ago


wow I like this caught I got caught up in it...

Posted 12 Years Ago


Wow! You put it so simple, but there can be so much being said in these words. This awesome poem reminded me immediately of the poem I wrote called, "Behind The Curtain.". It's awful how people lie and manipulate just to look good or to control someone. Bold poem. Thanks for sharing it with us! :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Not a bad poem. I think it could be improved, however, by omitting the word caught from the beginning of lines: 2 - 3 - 4 - 6--7-8-11.

The word caught, then becomes more powerful , developing its' own ryhthm as it repeats.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on March 30, 2009
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Amy
Amy

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Hello, my name is Amy. 22 years old. I'm a strong, independent, free thinking person. I don't have to see the world through the same eyes as everybody else. I have my own opinions. I can use my .. more..

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