I fEeL fReE

I fEeL fReE

A Poem by autumn

standing gently in the sunlight

i fill my lungs with the cool air

it finally feels like they are full

like for once i've taken in all im being offered

like for once i couldnt have done any better

all the potential energy has been turned to kinetic

and slowly that kinetic is turning to heat

heat im radiating to the world

like the heat the sun is radiating on me here where i stand

and i begin to feel an overwhelming calmness

all i have to think about here is gentle breaths

breaths that fill my lungs all the way

in a way that ive never felt before

here i can think of sweet dreams

i can live in sweet moments

i can feel accomplishment and a job well done

i can feel as though any choice i make is right

on this empty beach i listen

the sweet droning sound of silence

the consistent flowing of the waters

the feeling that everything is right in the world

the feeling that perfection does exist in small bursts

the feeling that im doing things right

fills my soul and sets free the stress bound up within

here on this empty beach i feel free

© 2010 autumn


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This piece is lovely, I felt as though I were rocking atop a boat over a lake or ocean. I enjoyed it. I'm eager to see what else you come up with. Remember, stretch your mind, your abilities, do what hurts-that's where the best writing is found. Good job,, looking forward to seeing more of your work, and welcome to WC!

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thanks alot your definitely picking up what im laying down haha

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Very nice write! I've read several of your writings---you love good music, you love good qualities in life, you love expressing yourself, you love LOVE and PEACE, and you love writing (a REAL good one!), which you seem to be very good at. Keep your love for all of these, and you'll find life very meaningful! Good job!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This piece is lovely, I felt as though I were rocking atop a boat over a lake or ocean. I enjoyed it. I'm eager to see what else you come up with. Remember, stretch your mind, your abilities, do what hurts-that's where the best writing is found. Good job,, looking forward to seeing more of your work, and welcome to WC!

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I really enjoyed this piece. It is a masterpiece in itself.

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I really enjoyed this write here. It is very lovely and so well written. Lots of feeling and wonderful imagery.

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I am a free soul who gets these tingles that urge me to write. It is the easiest way for me to be truly expressive. I enjoy that experience. I'm still young, but I'm very sure of myself and ready for .. more..

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