in this room

in this room

A Poem by autumn

music and love are one

i feel power entering me now
i can feel the strong emotion in this music in this room
the man behind the guitar
he is pouring out his love for a woman in this room
he is showing us he believes
something is so raw and enduring about this tune in this room
just as i write day in and day out
this man plays
each note brings me closer to him
love truly rings out of his fingers,
through cables strewn on the floor,
through the lifeless speakers,
into my ears and into my body creating unbound life
this song touches me like only one other thing can
and suddenly the two become one
the love between you and i is just like the song in this room
the two make me feels enlightened
or perhaps just lighter
i can sense everything around me here in this room
my heart races and my breathe speeds
this feels just like you and i
like when you lay with me, like when i can feel all of your love
when you take extra care to please me and to love me
the same way this man is taking extra care to make this music powerful
tears arise and stream out through these eyes just feeling such power
im in a trance most people would never understand
i have to release this energy and its all going to you
your gonna feel the power of love here tonight in this room

© 2010 autumn

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thanks i kinda do too :) haha nope no problem

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Added on November 30, 2010
Last Updated on December 1, 2010




I am a free soul who gets these tingles that urge me to write. It is the easiest way for me to be truly expressive. I enjoy that experience. I'm still young, but I'm very sure of myself and ready for .. more..

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