The Wolf and I

The Wolf and I

A Poem by Justsimplyjulia
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Just another poem of my crazy obsession with wolves!

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In the dead of night,
i stared out the window.
He was there,
staring at me,
and i at him.

So beautiful,
an image of power and strength.
My body burns with a desire to meet him,
and i run out.
I sit in the ashen snow,
and wait.

He walks to me,
slowly,
my body tingling with anticipation.
He is but a mere foot away.
I reach out,
to touch him.

He closes the distance between us,
nose pressing to my neck,
inhaling the scent of me.
My loyal wolf.

I run my fingers through his ivory fur,
as soft as silk feathers.
He sits before me,
ember eyes peering into mine,
and mine into his.
Where ice meets fire.

He licks my chin,
and a goofy smile lands upon my lips.
My loyal wolf.

My guardian angel,
keeping me safe until morning.
from all those who would do me harm.

© 2014 Justsimplyjulia


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Question: why is the first stanza in past and the rest in present? That's all that struck me as odd. Everything else is just plain gold! Well freaking done! Much enjoyed!

Posted 4 Years Ago


Justsimplyjulia

4 Years Ago

lol because i wrote this poem a very long time ago, when i knew nothing about poetry XD
emipoemi

4 Years Ago

well, with that tweaked along with a couple of very minor technicalities (that especially, though), .. read more
Dragon, this was beautiful and soft and filled with desire's imagination. You have done a wonderful job with this. Wolves are majestic animals but can also be deadly predators of the unsuspecting.

very nicely penned my friend.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Justsimplyjulia

10 Years Ago

thanks for reviewing jack!
-Dragon
I like this piece in such a way that I haven't the words to describe my admiration.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Justsimplyjulia

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much for reviewing Casanova, it makes me happy to know that others enjoy my writing!read more
"He licks my chin,
and a goofy smile lands upon my lips.
My loyal wolf.

My guardian angel,"

Posted 10 Years Ago


Justsimplyjulia

10 Years Ago

I don't know where that line really came from...
just did.
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

I like it alot...Bravo.................
The wolf is an admirable totem to behold...loyal, wise, protective, able to show you the doors to many lands, should you listen but also a reminder to preserve the old ways, the old wisdom, and so forth, lovely poem and I am glad you have such a totem x

Posted 10 Years Ago


Justsimplyjulia

10 Years Ago

Thank you!
A splendid poem on the wolf and you...Bravo.................

Posted 10 Years Ago


Justsimplyjulia

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much
-Dragon
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)....................
This is a wonderful, mildly erotic piece....
Excellent weave of words..an invigorating tapestry !!
Super write !!!

Admiration.
Scott

Posted 10 Years Ago


Justsimplyjulia

10 Years Ago

THANKS!!!
-Dragon
Scott Metro

10 Years Ago

:)
Scott......
Eww, the licking part, ha....gave me chills, good one Dragonheart!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Justsimplyjulia

10 Years Ago

hahah thank you!
-Dragon
Frieda P

10 Years Ago

I have a problem with slobber lol, my pleasure!
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ron
Wonderful poem. It would be wonderful if that would happen.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Justsimplyjulia

10 Years Ago

haha thank you for reviewing Ron!
-Dragon
ron

10 Years Ago

You are most welcome Dragon.

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Added on January 20, 2014
Last Updated on January 21, 2014
Tags: fantasy, dreams, love, angels, friendship

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Justsimplyjulia
Justsimplyjulia

Leamington, Ontario, Canada



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