Nothing

Nothing

A Poem by Jennifer

Take my brain

It has the truth

Nobody listens to the truth

 

Take my eyes

They see someone they like

Nobody likes me back

 

Take my hands

They are love

Nobody touches me back

 

Take my feet

They take me to someone

They bail on me when I arrive

 

Take my lungs

You should be the air that I breathe

Your ignorance is stifling me

 

Take my heart

It used to beat for you

My heart has no reason to beat

 

Take my happiness

There is no such thing

Too many people want to make me feel miserable

 

Take my sorrow

It has wept for you

My sorrow just weeps

 

Take my mouth

It wants to tell a story

Nobody is there to listen

 

Take all my reproduction

It's never going to give life

It's just simply used

 

Take it all and burn it

Because that is all everyone wants to do with it

 

 

© 2013 Jennifer


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Powerful words.....though our emotions can sometimes suck out all hope from our souls......while hope always remains.

My sister has accepted now, at the age of 48, that she is happily single. Either one has to make that decision, or keep the hope alive.....:)

Posted 4 Years Ago


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Powerful words.....though our emotions can sometimes suck out all hope from our souls......while hope always remains.

My sister has accepted now, at the age of 48, that she is happily single. Either one has to make that decision, or keep the hope alive.....:)

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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jb
Very unique indeed. I enjoyed it :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wonderfully painful poem, dear poet.

If we burn your everything, we burn this world, because the history of this world lives in every woman.
Shall we burn this world?

Posted 5 Years Ago


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Misery

5 Years Ago

If we do not burn this world, then we still have your everything.
What shall we do with your .. read more
Jennifer

5 Years Ago

Thank-you! My everything should just be known.
Misery

5 Years Ago

Poem by poem it is becoming known. You are welcome.
Very depressing poem that accurately describes those moments we all have when we feel down and nothing goes right. For me it's generally linked to PMS.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Brilliant work loved the poem

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jennifer

5 Years Ago

Thank-you!
Woah!!! That was just sooooo deep and wonderful. Literally,every word spoke for itself. Truly a amazing piece of writing. Great Work! Keep it up!

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jennifer

5 Years Ago

Thank-you. I'm glad to see more people enjoying this piece.
wordsofheart

5 Years Ago

Welcome. Well,it's worth it!
The poem is a superb work.You portrayed perfectly how a person is ignored by her loved one.
Thank you for sharing.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jennifer

5 Years Ago

Thank-you! I had some strong feelings that day.
zainul

5 Years Ago

You are always welcome!
Your words are very potent when it comes to conveying the anchoring effects and the drowning effects of emotion. I suspect that it is health to purge such shadows into ink form so that the daily breath doesn't have to be filled with soot from the fires of anguish and pain.
I hope that writing these words effected a theraputic resonance.

Hope and Light to you! Thanks for sharing your ink!
Aaron - Wolfwind


Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jennifer

7 Years Ago

I almost forgot I wrote this one. I wrote it about yet another person avoiding me. Love is a powerfu.. read more

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