Rainy Departure

Rainy Departure

A Poem by Michelle Anselm
"

Don't wait up, babe.

"

A flowing minidress across her form

The concrete was wet from the pouring storm

The taxi's seats were dry and warm

The cabbie waited patiently

As rain drops splattered against the panes

 

As sunlight peeked through drying clouds

The soft click of the door handle

As her heels and her purse made for the hotel lobby

My lips barely had time to say

Goodbye

© 2008 Michelle Anselm


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It is a bit of a cliffhanger...do they persue or not? lol..it was an awesome pawsome poem..Great Work!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You should have pursued. Nice little write.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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