I Don't Make Mistakes

I Don't Make Mistakes

A Poem by ♥Chloe-The-Zombie♥
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please please read.

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  People say,
  "everyone
  makes mistakes".
  But, what happens
  if you are the mistake?
  I am a mistake.
  I was never supposed
  to be born.
  I let down my parents,
  my friends, 
  and all of you who
  are reading this poem.
  I'm sorry.
  I am a mistake. 

© 2011 ♥Chloe-The-Zombie♥


Author's Note

♥Chloe-The-Zombie♥
dont leave stupid reviews saying im not. you cant change my mind.

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you arent a mistake Chloe..nobody is perfect :P you cant keep calling yourself a mistake, cause it wont get you anywhere in life :/ idc if u dont wanna hear it....ill say it anyways

Posted 13 Years Ago


SNAP OUT OF IT! YOU ARE NOT A MISTAKE1

Posted 13 Years Ago


Oh well. I'm not going to try and change your mind, but you should at least think about it. You wouldn't write these poems if you were a mistake. You'd be going out there and doing something about it. This puts out that you have a chance to write a poem about yourself being what you're not. Powerful poem, I agree, but you really have to stop these depressing poems! They're going to wind up doing something to you! Dx

Posted 13 Years Ago


Well....powerful write...

Posted 13 Years Ago


Short, but powerful, I like it (:

Posted 13 Years Ago


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