What Is Death?

  I am standing here,

  at your grave,

  and wondering

  what it felt

  like when you died.

  Did it hurt?

  Did it feel like nothing?

  Did it feel good?

  

  Did you see anything?

  Did you see God?

  Did you see Satan?

  Can anyone

  answer these 

  questions?

  

  Daniel?

  Fisher?

  Mom?

  Dad?

  Anyone?

Author's Note

kind of bad....

Reviews

[Ice QueenJen]

I don't think this was so bad, many people wonder what happens when we die. I think this was a very poignant poem and gets the reader to think.

[Richard Williams]

The first five lines are simple yet sincerely to the point.

[sammyj]

I do like this piece. You can expand your emotions and only you can do what needs to be done to wash your heart with all those memories to face another day.

[VioletRose]

I understand this poem, I like it. and only you can truly understand how you feel it affects your life. I can relate to this poem more then you know it. GREAT write

[Jazique]

No it was good simple. It was the simplest thoughts that we have on our mind when it comes to death. "What happens next?" Nice job.

[qaralynn]

good poem

[BlueberryKisses]

This poem is not bad at all! It is interesting, makes you think about the questions some people don't tend to ask, good job :)

[Miss Sally Sunshine]

this isn't bad at all. it's really good, great job.

[Midnight_Mystery]

questions everyone asks at some point. nicely done

[KAREN]

No, not bad at all. Many people can relate to this, I know I wonder why people have to die!