Adatiel

Nothing could ever come between the silence and me. What kind of friend would I be- if I took no time to analyze the Earth which you and I stand upon, and thought and spoke only in riddles about existence? Incapable of dancing in the rain, but perfectly comfortable studying its metaphor. Am I ever listening to you, or are you a project of mine? 

She is bigger than her identity. She is not a friend or a foe, she is a non-playable character- she could be there or she couldn't. Perhaps you have the option to delete her, ignore her, or if you're bored, follow her side quest. Does the rollercoaster of life hurt the rollercoaster? 

You don't have any answers, you just understand that she knows she doesn't belong here. 

Reviews

[Ada]

I almost wanted to hear more about paragraph one, since it is critical and causes the reader to re-think his or her role
in this world.

[scarlynn]

Thank you so much for your feedback :) It helps me figure out where to go from here.