Splintered walls- reciting rhapsody

Fate plays its game

Today was the night to celebrate

Celebrate the arrival of the new member

Who marked the journey of their marital bliss

 

Unfortunately made fate change its route

At sharp midnight struck the monstrous explosion

The scary night blew away their dwelling into blaze

Turning into ashes

 

Shaded in the color of glee appeared the blazed nirvana

Never overlooked the shattered bricks

Continued to memorize and recite

The rhapsody of their bond

Reviews

[Chirag Kumar]

An intense one didi. Nice :)

[Mitali Shah]

thanks Chirag :)

[marcus]

And we are all slaves, to the whims of fate!

[Mitali Shah]

Very true Marcus

[Coyote Poetry]

A lot said in the short poem.
"Continued to memorize and recite
The rhapsody of their bond"
I liked the above ending. True love can overcome anything. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Mitali Shah]

thank u so much Coyote :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[wordman]

a sad situation for sure,but they are alive and well
and tomorrow is another day

[Mitali Shah]

yep Wordman. Thanks for review