One Second Passing

Inspired by a walk bye stare

I was walking when I felt a stare

I looked up and saw him there

A boy who made my heart go boom

Looking at me as if I was the only one in the room

 

His eyes are what kept me staring back

Beautiful gorgeous and black

Into his soul, his eyes were used as a lure

For me to see his heart, oh, so pure

 

A private understanding between us, there was passed

I couldn't believe how this could have happend so fast

And then it was over just like that

I continued walking as he just stared and sat

 

I had never seen him before

But I wish I could see him more

I replay the moment again and again

I wonder "will you forget?" I do not think I can

 

I will never forget those eyes

And heart that held no lies

I did not even get to say hi

Nor did I get to say goodbye

Reviews

[Paege]

I love this poem. It is...I can't even think of words to describe it. Awesome, Amazing, Beautiful, Exellent, those words don't even come close to how good this is. Very good job.

[Adeline]

this poem is your best EVER! I remembered the title but not all of the poem and it was really good. way better than any of your others. write more like this.