love-2

love-2

A Poem by Dupur Mitra



i can love
i can do everything for love
what i can do for love
you can not believe

you can not believe
or you can not receive my love
i can love
but you are not appropriate for my love
you are not credible or reliable for my love

just see
when i touch the dew of the leaves
dews are fall down
or when i touch the touch me not plant
you are shy

i am afraid of your shyness
i am afraid of your fall down

so now i know i can love you
but you are not eligible for love me

© 2013 Dupur Mitra


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thnx

;-) Just wanted to beat you to it.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Love is hard. It seem we love what we can't have. I like the desire and the description in the poem. Love is luck and timing. Need to find the person you desire on the same path and with the same desire. Hard to do. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem,.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


This is very good, very lyrical, and I bet it reads very well in your native language too.
A poem with a lot of quality.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Dupur Mitra

8 Years Ago

thnx
Sounds like a whole lot of frustration in this kind of love. Complicated from the get go. Nicely pen'd.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Dupur Mitra

8 Years Ago

thnx
Desirable yet out of reach. That hurts so let's make up an excuse why it wasn't really desirable after all.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Dupur Mitra

8 Years Ago

thnx
Ah, forbidden love; hurts.
Good job here!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Dupur Mitra

8 Years Ago

thnx
A spiritual feel to this piece that has a mix of emotions from sad to enlightenment.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Dupur Mitra

8 Years Ago

thnx

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Added on February 16, 2013
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Dupur Mitra
Dupur Mitra

Dhaka , Bangladesh



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Dupur Mitra, is a poet and fiction writer from Bangladesh. Studied PhD from Jahangirnagar University, Dhaka in biodiversity and forest management. Published two books in Bangla, named 44 Kobeta (44.. more..

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