Kingfisher

You look nice
like a kingfisher
will you kill me
oh my dear

Reviews

[Stefon Napier]

Tell me another story like this in four lines and once you've finished with that one, tell me another. Let the poems come like sweet cupcakes!

[Vanesa Markovic]

I agree with Call Me Miss Imperfect, and that is precisely the reason I enjoy this short little taste of your minds space. It leaves me wondering what the story behind the words is, and a little mystery never hurt nobody, haha.

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

I read over this more than two times and I am puzzled. Maybe it isn't meant for everyone to completely understand. Writers ask for honest feedback and I am giving it. I do not know what this talking about. I might be lost, while everyone else has the key to this door. Unlock it for me and share with me the inspiration and meaning behind this please.

[Baby Ricochet]

We have Kingfishers around these parts down in the glades. They like to claim the space between poles on a wire. They're a "turf" bird for sure.

[Leslie Philibert]

Like the way you don`t use punctuation, and so turn the last line into a throwaway, ironical phrase.
An idea that impresses..