Restless Dance

Restless Dance

A Poem by mizukawaii2
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It is about uncertain decision

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The tap those feet made…

push the floor nowhere

but to sound like a jumping heartbeat

Her breath is catching up with the beat

The tap beat? The heart beat?

No one know but her

No one understand the melody but her

No one conquer the dance but her and her feet tap.

When will she stop?

Does the dance have the final melody?

Only the dancer has the answer

It is all in harmony of her heart and her feet.

© 2016 mizukawaii2


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I would have liked the s on the end of know, understand and conquer. It would have added to the pleasure I felt reading your poem.

Posted 5 Years Ago


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mizukawaii2

5 Years Ago

Thank you Peter. Have a blessed day :)
One can feel the moving of the heart and soul, the rhythm of the mind as it shift and stirs in this indecision. Yes, may the heart align with the feet and move into the perfect alignment of the soul.

Posted 5 Years Ago


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mizukawaii2

5 Years Ago

may these two feet dances well in the midst of grey air as the lungs tries also drunk by the air..

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Added on May 30, 2016
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Tags: life, woman, decision, work, dance

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mizukawaii2
mizukawaii2

Medan, North of Sumatera, Indonesia



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I am in love with nature, children and foods I look forward to everyday peace I feel like I need to deal with art everyday including the art of words Cant wait to meet great poets here!!! more..

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