Yours

Yours

A Poem by M J Moore
"

Just a piece in my head

"

 

Grab me

Force me

Make me weak

Make me cry

Make me scream

 

Hold me

Caress me

Make me warm

Make me soft

Make me whole

 

Look at me

See me

Want me

Make me believe

What those eyes are saying

 

Grab me-and hold me

Force me-and caress me

Make me weak, make me warm

Make me cry, make me soft

Make me scream, make me whole

 

Tell me with your eyes

Show me with your lips

Let me know it’s true

 

Because you’re already mine

 

Let me be yours

© 2008 M J Moore


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Beautifully penned
Romantic

Posted 6 Years Ago


Tell me with your eyes
Show me with your lips
Let me know it’s true

Because you’re already mine

Let me be yours

Simply beautiful, thanks for sharing

Posted 10 Years Ago


Romantic, passionate and sweet.
Good job! : )

Posted 11 Years Ago


M J Moore

11 Years Ago

Thank you very much :)
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11 Years Ago

My pleasure. :)
romantic and beautiful.Thank you for having an amazing mind, I like this a lot.

Posted 11 Years Ago


This is so full of undeniable passion and divine beauty... it sweetly rools off the tongue... Love it!!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very romantic! You alway have had a way with making people seeing just what your thinking.
Kelley Frost

Posted 16 Years Ago


MJ, you are quite the poet sweetheart. You take such simple words and turn them into something that has your reader hoping that you get exactly what you want! :) This is beautiful.

Love,
Stephanie

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This poem made me feel so good inside, and to want all of it be true for me. Very nicely written.

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

So romantic. To already love a person and want them to love you - how beautifully expressed in this poem. Just to be able to have this happen once in a lifetime, a miracle.

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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M J Moore
M J Moore

College Station, TX



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I want to be different some days. Some days I'm perfectly happy and content being me. I think in third person. I don't like to cry. Only 2 people can make me cry. I tend to strike out when I'm sad o.. more..

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