I Miss You So Much!

it is quite easy to follow, and enjoyable to read!

Try to keep in touch, I miss you so much
You are the best no need to test
Don’t scare I say take care
I wish to keep your entire tear
Remember you are my life first
Otherwise I prefer death trust
What is life? Nothing just struggle and try
Accept as true together we can touch the sky
I can’t share you anywhere
God blessings shower us everywhere
Lovers live in Eden this is sure
Where all desire fulfills no any devils more
You absorb me like rose
Loveliness is our host
Love makes valiant where no exist any fears
God (Allah) helps you like upstairs

Reviews

[one sky]

Sweet and romantic, Kamran. I am just confused with the last line. Usually, the last line should be the most captivating. Hope you understand.
Thank you for the invite.

[Kamran Javed]

here I pray for her from GOD (ALLAH)

[Kristin Lee]

The passion really bleeds through in this piece. I can hear the sorrow and the longing. It's a beautiful piece.

[DIVYA]

Great to read. All written with love about love. Thanks for sharing!

[luviva]

ohhhhh this is so sweet!!
you knw.. just like honey flowing down .
the ryhmes all matched and the wording was pretty good!
all i an say is just let your heart communicate to us your readers..
coz we wanna knw what lies deep down inside u!!
real good read enjoyed it!

[Kamran Javed]

Thank you.