Silence

Silence calling thru the trees

never knowing what I need

heaven smiling at my frown

help me find my common ground

make me shiver, make me wait

go on running, take me down

silence hurting in my ears

silence tearing thru the years

finding places to live by

in all the silence I shall cry

 

Reviews

[Cool Handless Luke]

I absolutely love this - very nice!

[Shugo Wellen]

that is a very good poem. normally I don't like poems, but this one is incredible. Very good job

[Stalker]

Dang this is good wish I had your talent my only talent Is breaking my bones, and climging trees. Lol loved it, was a masterpiece I would love to feature this in Knowledge Stalkers. This suits me good since I've had lots of sielence actualy I think I now love sielence and would miss it if it left. My great grandma just died yesterday, so theirs lots of sielence right now. Plus thanks for joining Knowledge Stalkers.
- Stalker

[Call me Jane]

haha i do wish i could write like you...... XD you know that i
LOVE it LOTS..............

[Phantom Heart]

Your depiction of silence is incredible. Amazing write.

[crashandburnplz]

Hm.. This kind of confused me.
Overall, it's a great poem. I love the theme.

Being the Grammar Nazi I am, I suggest you go spell out some words. :]

[Star-Born-Soul]

I like the theme you have going here, silence can be so loud sometimes. I learn so much from silence, it's a big part of my life and a good friend. You have a talent for flow, rhyme and rhythm. Thanks for sharing.

[AmeliaRose]

i like how your personified Silence, it makes me think of silence more thoroughly