Tears

Tears

A Poem by Queen Jummarrium
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not based on real life experience

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Tears go rolling down my face

all my sadness can't be erased

I sob and wonder why I'm upset

I'm so frustrated and confused

it makes me angry and more upset

these hurtful feelings I won't soon forget

why am I crying

what happened thats so bad

I almost called you

to help me understand

now I'm all distraught

and my eyes are bloodshot

I want to go home

I want to leave now

 

© 2009 Queen Jummarrium


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This is very visually stimulating. I like your style!
Keep writing

Posted 12 Years Ago


I like how you portray the image of your tears. Though it is not based on real life, you wrote it well and conveyed the message and emotion nicely
-ruth

Posted 12 Years Ago


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This is called a state of depression and the questions you ask yourself in this dark despair clearly shows that you really can't fathom what is happening and why.
You also draw an image ... and all your sadness will be erased when your tears are erased
well done!

Posted 12 Years Ago



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