A first kiss

A first kiss

A Poem by melril18
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Not a typical first kiss

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Tonight I had my first kiss
With a cigarette.
It was sweet
Promising.
Held me tight and didn't let me go.
A cloud of smoke escaped my mouth.

Fell back on the grass
Laughing
Gasping
Blushing
Felt free dizzy euphoric
Buzzed
Kissed again. Liked the taste of it.
Craved more.
And more.
First addiction.

© 2013 melril18


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Well written...:)..................

Posted 10 Years Ago


its a double meaning poem....
one for smoking and one for girl....
both of view are greatly explained.....

keep going...

Posted 10 Years Ago


very well written keep it up my friend

Posted 10 Years Ago



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