Cool Summer

A Poem by M Lamont

Colorful beach balls

Waves pounding the sand castles

Tanned bodies rotate

Crisp boardwalk French fries

Chewy salt water taffy

Delicious summer

Sand in the bed sheets

Clean white cotton cools the burn

Dreams of surf and sun

Written by: Mark Lamont

July 2007

© 2008 M Lamont

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Fran Marie

Colorful beach balls

Waves pounding the sand castles

Tanned bodies rotate

A day at the beach is delicious fun in the sun and a great getaway~THanks for
submitting this to the Love Shack contest~Fran Marie

Posted 15 Years Ago

A. L. Robinson

Very nice! Makes me want to dream of beach sand and sun :)

Posted 16 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Anata

very nice :)
and i'm glad i was of inspiration to you :D
Really like this one :) it truly gave me the feeling of being on holiday and playing at the beach ;)
nicely written! really ;)

Posted 16 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Celtic Cat

Ah yes.... now I miss the shore!!! D****t! Been spending my summers in the mountains lately..
This was great!!!!! Very cool!

Posted 16 Years Ago

2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

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Added on March 2, 2008

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M Lamont

Alexandria, VA

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I got back into in the fall of 2006 after a friend urged me to do so. She is a musician and I was inspired by her lyrics. Thanks Little Mouse!!! My inspiration comes from friend�s stori.. more..