Where To Go

Where To Go

A Poem by M Lamont
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For a contest. a 2,4,6,8,10,8,6,4,2 rhyming scheme

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I know

What not to grow
Unmatched love does not sow
Alone, weary this life I know
The pain surrounds me, my head to my toes
Resigned to die not fast but slow
Stuck in this world, can’t go
Lights dim, faint glow
Dread flows
 
Written by: Mark Lamont
August 2007

© 2008 M Lamont


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Mark, I am moved by the first three lines. I read and stop and reread, lovely. The pattern is fantastic making the poem visually flowing, I must do a writing like this soon! The content takes me so many so many places, on the heels of one of Cat's poems, but the slow kill in yours is uncontrollable and unavoidable. I feel the pain. Love the title and the sand footprints brings me to where you are. I always like to leave positive... so here goes:

He knows
What I have grown
Love like this surely sows
Together, always, for an eternity
The love surrounds me... ten-fold
Resigned to wait but flying fast
Can�t wait to see him
When can I go?


Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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Absolutely amazing. I don't know the goal of the contest, but this was exquisite, for sure!!
Great work, Mark, truly.

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Mark, I am moved by the first three lines. I read and stop and reread, lovely. The pattern is fantastic making the poem visually flowing, I must do a writing like this soon! The content takes me so many so many places, on the heels of one of Cat's poems, but the slow kill in yours is uncontrollable and unavoidable. I feel the pain. Love the title and the sand footprints brings me to where you are. I always like to leave positive... so here goes:

He knows
What I have grown
Love like this surely sows
Together, always, for an eternity
The love surrounds me... ten-fold
Resigned to wait but flying fast
Can�t wait to see him
When can I go?


Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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