Life Input

Life Input

A Poem by M Lamont
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Just being positive!

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It’s a pity
That I am not the prettiest girl in school
And such a shame for you
To think it’s true
 
What a waste
That I am not the best dancer you have seen
I move and I shake like I like
But everyone feels it’s lame
 
So I am not an athlete
I like to run and play and have fun
But I am not the best or even better than others
And this matters to you
 
On the intelligence scale
I may not score the highest points, but not low either
I do have thoughts and view points
Why won’t anyone listen to them?
 
All these inputs to my life
Can be the proverbial weight of the world
But the strength it builds in me to knock them back
Makes a stronger and better me each day
 
Written by: Mark Lamont
January 2008
 

© 2008 M Lamont


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Nice positive knock back... we are all perfectly made the way we are, and aren't we are special! : )

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

An excellent write...well done!


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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Just being positive.

Posted 12 Years Ago


An Excellent write so very well penned~Thanks for sharing~Fran Marie

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"Lessen the doldrums of your fellow bipeds" is a line I recall a lot. I never figured who wrote it though. A nice write with a clear consistent structure. Thankyou for sharing!

Posted 12 Years Ago


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M Lamont

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