Now Us

Now Us

A Poem by M Lamont

 

 
You drew me in
Outlined and highlighted
And filled me in with color
 
You led me in
I followed your path
And stepped softly in your foot print
 
You showed me a way
One that I needed
And I forged without a map
 
I pulled you in
And reflected a new light
You squinted into the brightness
 
I stood next to you
And we walked together
In our own way but as one
 
Created by what we followed
Created by what was reflected
We created us
 
Written by: Mark Lamont
August 2008

© 2008 M Lamont


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Created by what we followed
Created by what was reflected
We created us

This is great stuff!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Lovely piece to come back with...I enjoyed this Mark! -:3 )~~~

p.s. - Did you plan to repeat title at start? Could stand/flow w/out it! : )

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very nice and sweet, your words flow nice and gently across the page.
Thanks for entering in my contest and the best of luck to you.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I agree with Cat. Absolutely stunning!

"I stood next to you
And we walked together
In our own way but as one"

Absolutely loved by me.
AW

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow........ this is stunning!! So so so so great!!! Now I don't feel so bad for asking you to "post" it! lol I got two for the price of one!! woohoo!!! And both were equally worthy of every penny spent!!!
love love love this piece.

Posted 11 Years Ago


I like!!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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M Lamont
M Lamont

Alexandria, VA



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