Burn

A Poem by Mai L Nissen

To be honest, this poem is inspired by a multiple of feelings and different events... so don't really know what it is about myself :)

Burn through the floor

Burn as you fall

Quench out the water

Let it evaporate in the air

Burn through the pain

Burn as you arise

Shed all burdens

Let the ashes fall and settle

calm

2nd of September 2015

© 2015 Mai L Nissen

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Jamestown

Well penned and expressed!
few words that have powerful meaning,
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed

Posted 8 Years Ago

JMKane117

I really like the first line. It resonates and drew an interesting picture in my head. The rest of the poem is great as well, but that first line informed everything else. Well done!

Posted 8 Years Ago

Coyote Poetry

Hard to do, but we must. Burn away the sadness and disappointment and go forward. I enjoyed the logic of the words. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago

Rinzin Samdup

FAll and RISE..a positive vibe in there. well written. :)

Posted 8 Years Ago

jacob erin-cilberto

another really interesting piece from you...like the Phoenix....go through the worst and rise up from the ashes...to a certain calm.

Posted 8 Years Ago

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Added on September 2, 2015
Last Updated on September 2, 2015
Tags: #burn, #fall, #arise, #burdens, #ashes, #water, #poem, #poetry

Author

Mai L Nissen

Odense, Region Syddanmark, Denmark

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I am 30 years old, a graduate student from Denmark, studying English (literature, history, linguistics) and Scientific Study of Religion. If you wish to befriend me, I would like you to read some .. more..