Mend or Mind

Scraps of memories

Circling within consciousness

Nowhere to settle

Author's Note

Criticism is well received

Reviews

[zaisham9393]

I love the way you captured the emotions so perfectly in a few words.

Thank you for sharing :)!

[Coyote Poetry]

True words and thoughts. Our mind wild and restless. Hard to find peace in this world. Thank you Mai for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i like this senryu...the memories never do settle, they never rest....and often keep us in a state of unrest.