"Friends"

-current anger with roommates

Never again
will i be betrayed
by the face
of innocence
"We love you"
they say
but love
is a joke.
Humour's attempt
at laughing
right
in your
face.
Love
doesnt mean
a goddamn thing
to them.

Author's Note

*this isnt very good but i needed a place to just write down immediately what i was thinking.

Reviews

[emmanem]

I actually thought this was pretty good. A nice, short little poem that gets to the point.
I do also enjoy the short lines with 1-2 words. I think it gives it a little more power, if you know what I mean.
And I've felt like this before, being angry with people about love and whatnot. Sucks, right?
But really good job, anyways (:

[Manpreet]

Nice poem. I liked it specially the lines
"We love you"
they say
but love
is a joke.