Split

Split

A Poem by Kimberly "Melody" Carney
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Two things you should learn to embrace, that which draws you in & that witch makes you cringe. Within both is wisdom.

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We SPLIT, define, masking the underline.

Shallow as the depth of mirrors!

All reviled in sweetened time.

Unable to wash the soul with tears.

 

Keep walking the thin glass line,

one day you must face your fears.

You are SPLIT and undefined!

The raw darkened side sneers,

 

aware it has been undermined.

Hold fast, turn, change gears!

Be raw as the time draws nearer.

Heal the darkness as it appears.

 

No longer SPLIT, vision clearer.

 

~Melody

 

 

 

© 2012 Kimberly "Melody" Carney


Author's Note

Kimberly "Melody" Carney
What we so often define ourselves by, is the same image we see in the mirror. Unfortunately this image holds as much depth as the mirror itself.
In reflection

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Wow my Poet friend. A very powerful poem. I like the places you took me in your words. Hard to find peace in your reflection. I ask myself daily. Did I do anything good? A mental journey into amazing poetry. Thank you.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Beautiful poem

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is very beautiful!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is an amazingly powerful point, we all must look at our reflections for a further meaning of ourselves, but the biggest mistake I made was to try an discard my other or multiple personas, this was my biggest pretence, to myself.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Images can label us and put us in boxes. So often, what is seen on the outside does not speak to the true person inside. Its a glass image with no warmth and this is what we are judged by. Beautiful poem!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

nice really liked this

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Love the point you bring with this poem and your comments afterward.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thought provoking with powerful words. Great job!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow my Poet friend. A very powerful poem. I like the places you took me in your words. Hard to find peace in your reflection. I ask myself daily. Did I do anything good? A mental journey into amazing poetry. Thank you.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice write, nice music video to go with it, nice author's note. The mirror's image does hold a lot, just as we do. Split, I like that title.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow, awesome and scary..

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on July 21, 2012
Last Updated on August 23, 2012
Tags: confusion, shame, pain, healing, Love, health, ageing, grace, life, abuse, poetry, wisdom, knowlage, nature, understanding, family, purity, soul, unity, equality

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Kimberly "Melody" Carney
Kimberly "Melody" Carney

Denver, CO



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