Come Dream With Me

Come Dream With Me

A Poem by Kimberly "Melody" Carney

 

 

 

 

Against the stone I lay my head

The dreams brisk though my mind

Shapes and colors, oh so divine

Right here is where I shine

 

Blades of grass, a slight purple hue,

Silver clouds, peace inclined.

Trees that whisper and sing to me,

I am one of a kind.

 

I’ve dreamed of dark and shallow graves,

and flowers wince they came.

I’ve dreamed of shepherds gone astray,

the sheep are marred and lame.

 

I see the thunder strike the earth,

And start new life with in.

I’ve seen life; wasted, consumed,

about the mortal sin.

 

My dreams are simple and revered.

They see both sides of life.

I dream that you might dream with me,

And set aside your strife.

 

So come with me, lay down your head,

And set your cares aside.

Against the stone release your mind.

The ropes of life untied.

 

~Melody

 

 

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© 2012 Kimberly "Melody" Carney


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Beautiful artwork and strong words.
"My dreams are simple and revered.
They see both sides of life.
I dream that you might dream with me,
And set aside your strife."
A positive poem filled with beauty and hope. Thank you for the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Beautiful poem

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This flowed like a dream ! I like the way your writes ask the reader to drift away from the hum drum, the rigmarole of everyday , to break free , to live truly .. thanks for sharing ~

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It's just lovely and artistic! like it :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful and descriptive poem. Your words are enchanting, I can see them in my mind. I really like how you take the imagination for a spin, creating a dream on a place with vibrant colors to a dark and shadowy graves. Great job! 100/100

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful poem about the mystery of dreams! I love the last line, the ropes of life untied. Our journeys in dreams often free us from the heaviness of everyday life! Easy flow of words and imagery, beautiful!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is such a beautiful poem . Great job. It has a relaxing flow to it. I love the first picture as well. 'Within' is one word, not two.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Your poem portrays a strong contrast with the beauty of life, flowers and colors, as opposed to death and the grave. I love the images shown with the poem. Author or artist name?

Posted 9 Years Ago


Kimberly "Melody" Carney

9 Years Ago

I wrote the poem and all pictures were from google images...sorry do not have the mane of whom took .. read more
Pencrafter

8 Years Ago

As an artist, painter and photographer I like to see the author's name connected to any work, if it'.. read more
Beautiful artwork and strong words.
"My dreams are simple and revered.
They see both sides of life.
I dream that you might dream with me,
And set aside your strife."
A positive poem filled with beauty and hope. Thank you for the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Awesome

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very nice write with images that draw the words into great picture, nice music as well.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Kimberly "Melody" Carney
Kimberly "Melody" Carney

Denver, CO



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To really truly believe in your dreams and make them come true… you must not first believe in yourself, but be prepared to prove your doubts and fears wrong. To know giving up is not an easy .. more..

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