Sweet Serenity

Sweet Serenity

A Poem by Kimberly "Melody" Carney
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***WIND***

"

Sweet Serinity

 

 

Breath of life,

now consume me.

I come,

to make amend.

I see,

 the smells aside me.

My dear,

 and blessed friend.

Hear,

the colors around me.

 Soul,

 captured completely.

This Grand,

blessed sea of trees.

 Leaves,

 speak to me softly.

 

 The earth,

 slowly becomes me.

Oh,

sweet serenity.

 Oh my,

 Sweet serenity.

 Truly,

blessed within thee

© 2012 Kimberly "Melody" Carney


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Wonderful write Melody...and though I don't usually follow instructions...I did as you asked and reread it with the music as background. A true meditational/yoga experience... I truly felt serene and at ease with the world...and boy can I ever use peace at this time...very soulful and heartfelt write Melody. rhythmic and ethereral...oozing with beautiful images.
Thanks for sharing Melody
allen

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thank you for such a wonderful write

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Not much is said. But this holds somewhat of a feeling of serenity or peace. The natural world is a wonderful thing. Thanks for sharing :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Refreshing, relaxing and made me feel better..thanks :D

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Very soothing and serene.

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Beautiful words flow with yo, wonderful video too! We are the highest possible level when we start creating a nature of our own!

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Kimberly "Melody" Carney

12 Years Ago

very kind words! I am humbled.
A pleasing meditation. The repetition gives it a strength of purpose that focuses on the blessing sassociated with the various images you use.... A fragrant piece of writing in many ways...

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Kimberly "Melody" Carney

12 Years Ago

Thank you;)
lovely ...i enjoyed reading it ...thank you for such a wonderful write

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Kimberly "Melody" Carney

12 Years Ago

I am so glad you enjoyed it. ;)
Beautiful artwork and video. I enjoyed the poetry. Description gave life to the artwork and video. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

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Very nice capturing write, and pictures as well as the sound in the author's note, it all makes for a nice relaxing write. Enjoyed.

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It is amazing how the sound of the ocean or being there watching the waves roll up on the shore can sooth the weary soul causing serenity to wash over you.

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Kimberly "Melody" Carney

12 Years Ago

amazing indeed!

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Kimberly "Melody" Carney
Kimberly "Melody" Carney

Denver, CO



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