Waters of Hope

Waters of Hope

A Poem by Kimberly "Melody" Carney
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***WATER***

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Cool water covers me,

 I rest 'till submersion.

 My heart at peace,

 Within myself I now console.

Caressing me deep,

 To wash this world’s corrosion.

Purge me deep, ever flowing

 Waters make me whole.

 Flow from me,

Unforgotten mistakes.

Fresh air,

Filled with a new begotten hope.

Now rising from you,

 deep slow breaths I take.

Meditation,

 Cleansing spiritual soap.

 With life anew,

Each moment, I breathe deep.

To you I come,

 Cool water peace I keep.

 

© 2012 Kimberly "Melody" Carney


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Kimberly "Melody" Carney

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EMF
An extremley musical poem, that would suit music as well as it suits the page. It flows beautifully with a marvelous theme. Can't help but leave you feeling... clean. A marvelous introduction to your work. Highly impressed at the way you manipulate the words with such skill and confidence

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Kimberly "Melody" Carney

12 Years Ago

I am humbled by your review as well as all the reviews. Thank you so kindly.
Kimberly "Melody" Carney

12 Years Ago

Thank you my kind friend



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Pax
the music and the poem fits well beautifully

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A very lovely poem :))

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That is actually quite relaxing!
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I love your world of peace, and beauty .. .. Lovely images ..

Jasmine

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Kimberly "Melody" Carney

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Thank you oh so kindly
J. J.  Nightingale

12 Years Ago

You are welcome, in the end it's all we really want, and need . .. .
Oooh this is so beautiful and deep my friend. I am feeling at home in your words, and thoughts.
A wonderful pieceful poem, full of joy. Thanks

E.L.

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Kimberly "Melody" Carney

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You are a blessed and kind friend !

12 Years Ago

So are you X
A spiritual awakening from a self discovery baptism. Such beautiful words.

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Beautiful!

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Sounds like music to my ears. I love the rhythm and rhyme.
I just wanna ask. Did you write this thing while you were in the bath tub? hehehe just kidding.
Probably you're a type of person who loves to relax in the comfort of the bath tub.

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Kimberly "Melody" Carney

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LOL! No I wish I could write while in the tub....hmmm I may just try that..smile. I write most my po.. read more
Caressing me to wash this world s corrosion, I love this, a truly beautiful write, uplifting cleansing the mind, body and soul. Cant help but feel filled with the purest of light. Thank you for sharing.

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EMF
An extremley musical poem, that would suit music as well as it suits the page. It flows beautifully with a marvelous theme. Can't help but leave you feeling... clean. A marvelous introduction to your work. Highly impressed at the way you manipulate the words with such skill and confidence

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kimberly "Melody" Carney

12 Years Ago

I am humbled by your review as well as all the reviews. Thank you so kindly.
Kimberly "Melody" Carney

12 Years Ago

Thank you my kind friend

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Kimberly "Melody" Carney

Denver, CO



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