Waters of Hope

Cool water covers me,

 I rest 'till submersion.

 My heart at peace,

 Within myself I now console.

Caressing me deep,

 To wash this world’s corrosion.

Purge me deep, ever flowing

 Waters make me whole.

 Flow from me,

Unforgotten mistakes.

Fresh air,

Filled with a new begotten hope.

Now rising from you,

 deep slow breaths I take.

Meditation,

 Cleansing spiritual soap.

 With life anew,

Each moment, I breathe deep.

To you I come,

 Cool water peace I keep.

 

Author's Note

Reviews

[EMF]

An extremley musical poem, that would suit music as well as it suits the page. It flows beautifully with a marvelous theme. Can't help but leave you feeling... clean. A marvelous introduction to your work. Highly impressed at the way you manipulate the words with such skill and confidence

[Kimberly "Melody" Carney]

I am humbled by your review as well as all the reviews. Thank you so kindly.

[Kimberly "Melody" Carney]

Thank you my kind friend

[Pax]

the music and the poem fits well beautifully

[Amila Jay]

A very lovely poem :))

[Tony]

That is actually quite relaxing!
:]

[J. J. Nightingale]

I love your world of peace, and beauty .. .. Lovely images ..

Jasmine

[Kimberly "Melody" Carney]

Thank you oh so kindly

[J. J. Nightingale]

You are welcome, in the end it's all we really want, and need . .. .

[Kimberly "Melody" Carney]

Oooh this is so beautiful and deep my friend. I am feeling at home in your words, and thoughts.
A wonderful pieceful poem, full of joy. Thanks

E.L.

[Kimberly "Melody" Carney]

You are a blessed and kind friend !

So are you X

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

A spiritual awakening from a self discovery baptism. Such beautiful words.

[~LadyWolf~]

Beautiful!

[Sir Joe]

Sounds like music to my ears. I love the rhythm and rhyme.
I just wanna ask. Did you write this thing while you were in the bath tub? hehehe just kidding.
Probably you're a type of person who loves to relax in the comfort of the bath tub.

[Kimberly "Melody" Carney]

LOL! No I wish I could write while in the tub....hmmm I may just try that..smile. I write most my poems while listening to the musuc you hear. In about the same time as it takes the music to play.

[Ink Angel]

Caressing me to wash this world s corrosion, I love this, a truly beautiful write, uplifting cleansing the mind, body and soul. Cant help but feel filled with the purest of light. Thank you for sharing.