Should I

Should I

Allow this experience we’ve both been

Longing to have

To do more than kiss

To go further than touching tenderness

Holding each other so tight

Never letting go while whispering odes

Of love

Your ears not hearing all the things I’m always

Thinking of

Your gentle tugging on my shirt

Eyes flirting and scanning every inch

Of exposed skin

Dare we go to that place of no return

Or do we continue to let the fires

Burn

Fears are falling down

I want so much to believe and trust

Diving in and feasting on pleasure

As long as you promise it’s not banal

Lust

Enter 

Please

Take

Me

Now that my heart and soul are yours

You hold my everything inside your

Hands

I may have feelings of insecurity once

You leave me

I hope you have patience and

Understand

I’ll be waiting for your return…

I hope this won’t be a cruel lesson

For me to learn

Reviews

[Iota]

I can say that every guy has wished that she would allow those experiences to develop into more. It took me a while to learn the fear women had with that, the risk they were taking in allowing it to just happen. This poem is truly beautiful from beginning to end. It shows the desire to step forward and it shows the fear of the outcome. Excellent.

[Chris]

The aftertaste of "real" and a hell of a question needing answered.

[B. Boileau]

belief and trust are sometimes hard to come by. Your words excel in a discription of the chance taken.
insecurity, fear of cruel lesson, and the hope of patience and understanding... Nicely done !
You don't read rusty at all

[Starbound25]

steamy and tender, loved it