{...pawns...}

{...pawns...}

A Poem by Christopher Michael Smith

Constant struggle, For what?

Money, phones, gas, and songs?

Laboring for the material of the world.

I want none of this bologne; it's full of mold.

Constant agony of 'clocking' in.

Working so the CEO's can sit back and grin.

Where's the escape button?

Did someone forget to install?

Another day as a corporate slave,

making their money, as I dig my grave.

Work til you die....

Get money, Get high...

Biggest lie ever told.

We are not equal.

We are bought and sold.

© 2011 Christopher Michael Smith


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I think everybody has felt like the protagonist in your poem. Sometimes we are aware of our situation, sometimes we are not. We should work in order to live not live in order to work.
Unless one is paid to do what he/she likes to do of course.
Thank you for reminding us

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Oooh I really liked the rhyme in this! To be honest, I didn't even notice it until the last two lines, probably because they were shorter. That takes talent, great job!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I think everybody has felt like the protagonist in your poem. Sometimes we are aware of our situation, sometimes we are not. We should work in order to live not live in order to work.
Unless one is paid to do what he/she likes to do of course.
Thank you for reminding us

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Good write. I know I've felt like I was just working to make ends meet while my bosses were sitting around getting paid for looking comfortable in their chairs. Thanks for sharing this with us.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lv it liked the

Posted 12 Years Ago


this is very well written, and it rings a certain truth, arent we all pawns in their game? i really enjoyed it, great job

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great use of metaphors, very well written. I'm sure this is how we're all feeling right now with the times. Great write!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Christopher Michael Smith
Christopher Michael Smith

Clinton, NC



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Ego sum qui sum - 'I am what I am' Poetry is my creative expression here upon this floating ball of dust called Earth. Nothing feels as appeasing as watching a pen glide across a virgin page, watc.. more..

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